Paragraph building for IELTS Writing Task 2 - converting a plan into a paragraph about staff uniforms
In the video below, I convert the plan from the previous post into a simple paragraph that will not get a high band score.
This is the second in a series of four posts, as follows
- Brainstorming - here
- Writing a simple paragraph that won't get a high band score - this post
- Creating a high band score paragraph here
- Explaining a high band score paragraph here
See if you can write your own paragraph before you see mine. See the plan here
Try to fix the problems mentioned in the video - you can find the text in the video description.
In the third video I convert this simple paragraph into a high band score one. See here