Paragraph building for IELTS Writing Task 2 - converting a plan into a paragraph about staff uniforms
In the video below, I convert the plan from the previous post into a simple paragraph.
This is the second in a series of three videos, which are organised as follows
See if you can write your own paragraph before you see mine. See the plan here
See if you can fix the problems mentioned in the video - you can find the text in the video description.
In the next video I will convert this simple paragraph into a high band score one.
Stay tuned 🙂