Task 2 Sample marked scripts

IELTS Task 2 Corrected writing

Instructions

For maximum benefit, I recommend that you do the following before reading my Task 1 model answers

Click on the links below to see high band score model answers and corrected students' writing.

See how to get maximum benefit from these answers by clicking this button:

  • Study the question carefully
  • Make sure you fully understand it before you start your answer
  • Identify the main features
  • Decide what information you'll include in your answer
  • Decide on the organisation -
    • What will you describe first?
    • How many paragraphs?
    • How will you  organise your paragraphs?
    • What information will you group together?
  • Write your answer in 20 minutes on a proper IELTS writing form - get one here.
  • Then study your answer and do it again - take as long as you like and check your structures on the internet
  • Then
    • Compare your answer to mine
    • Memorise some of my structures - pay attention to the grammar and lexis
    • Add some of my sentences to Anki so that you'll remember them for ever   - see here
    • Rewrite my answer.  Use active reading to learn structures - see here
    • Look at it again the next day