Yesterday we wrote a simple topic sentence for paragraph 1 for this question.
These days people change their jobs and relocate more often than before.
Why do you think people change their jobs more now?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for society?
The main idea for paragraph one is
Reasons why people change their jobs
Our simple, default topic sentence was
There are various reasons why people change their jobs
Let’s continue and build a high band score topic sentence.
The supporting ideas in this paragraph are
Some people change their jobs because they choose to
Some people change their jobs because they need to
How can you add these supporting ideas to the topic sentence above?
Tomorrow we'll look at another way of doing the same thing.
We now have a high band score topic sentence which does two things:
- It tells the examiner what the main idea is
- It outlines the supporting idea in simple terms
In order to write a topic sentence like this you need to understand noun phrases and noun clauses. You can find more about noun clauses and noun phrases here