Instructions 

For maximum benefit, I recommend that you do the following before reading these corrections

• Click on the links below to open the pdf of my corrections
• Read the student's answer on page 1
• See if you can identify any errors eg
  • Grammar
  • Vocab
  • Relevance - is it on-topic
  • Is the paragraph built logically
  • Do the ideas make sense
• Then look at page 2
  • Some mistakes are highlighted in yellow
  • Work out what's wrong 
  • Write down corrections
• Proceed to the rest of the document
  • See if your corrections wee the same as mine
  • Make sure you understand my comments and corrections
• Finally, rewrite the paragraph

If you’re serious about succeeding in IELTS, you need to be professional and use an approach like the one above.