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Tatiana
Tatiana
3 years ago

Dear Tony, Thank you for your useful site. However i am confused. In various sites i have read that it is necessary to mention trends also. So overall paragraph should include 1. the highest , the lowest 2. trends – increasing, decreasing. So my introduction would be like: Overall, both UK and Australia were the most popular countries for V students for study while US was the least popular thought the whole period. In addition, there was an obvious growth in number of students in all countries over this twelve-year period OR all countries experienced a growth in student numbers… Read more »

Tatiana
Tatiana
3 years ago
Reply to  AWG

HI Tony,
Thank you very much for your valuable comments! I will work on my grammar !
Kind regards,
Tatiana

Doc
Doc
3 years ago

Dear Tony,

I got my required band. Overall 7.5. My weakest point was writing and I followed initially Liz and then got address of your website from her. I think your way of teaching writing is exceptional, simple yet very effective. I got 7.5 in writing. Could not believe I did that. I m thankful to you.

Mia
Mia
3 years ago

Could you please explain why the explanation has ended in “past perfect tense”, why not continued in simple past tense?
if it was in the latter tense,is it wrong?

Can it be mentioned in introduction that “the comparison is done every alterante year over a-12 year-period,from 2000 to 2012.”
thanks

Mia
Mia
3 years ago
Reply to  AWG

very informative ……thank you

Mia
Mia
3 years ago

is the word ‘distribution’ correct instead of ‘popularity’?

Mia
Mia
3 years ago
Reply to  AWG

introduction:
the given bar chart illustrates the distribution of students from Vietnam in different countries,namely the UK,the US & Australia.Their numbers are depicted in 1000s & the analysis is done every altenate year, spanning from 2000 to 2012.
Could you please go through this?

doc
doc
4 years ago

Dear tony can you please comment on the essay The bar chart illustrates the total number of students from Vietnam who studied in three different countries, US, Australia and the UK over a period of 12 years from 200 to 2012 Overall, the numbers of Vietnamese students studying in the UK and Australia increased in the given period, whereas for the US it fluctuated. In the start of period, around 10,000 students from Vietnam studied both in United States and Australia, while just under 5000 students opted for America. The trend of Vietnamese students going abroad to the the UK… Read more »

Divya
4 years ago

Thanku tony